beta
Seems like a touch of self awareness lol hes been a jerk 98% of the time and still unlikeable the other 2 but shes acting (which has been top notch btw) like he's amazing and taking injuries for him. it would feel unrealistic
A lil all over the place (timeline and details randomly) but it comes together. Maybe I missed it but I just dont understand why she can't tell her family anything?(kidnapped, powers, transforming, etc)