the whole back and forth storyline is annoying to follow. present then past, then past to present. 'green-flag' alpha has no pride or teeth. romance is one sided, 'omega' ML is boring. i can't be invested just because we see them get married and have a child together, i don't care enough to see them be together. i'm sick of seeing the alpha get NTR without them actually having any romantic scenes besides the 'phero shower' like thats supposed to be meaningful? didn't they said they hate the whole alpha-omega dynamic? the only thing they have in common is that they both hate their secondary gender but then they go and do the whole 'alpha-omega' scenting stuff because it benefits them, how convenient. oh and they're both rich. yeah boohoo.
i hate seeing both alphas compete for the omega when the omega doesn't like or want either of them. i thought this was gonna be a feel good thing, and i did like the top being a bit yandere, but the bottom isn't just as invested or interested, like he's probably 10% while the other is 110%. i like my pining to be on both sides.









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