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Plot hole author

Seriusly plot hole .mhe basically fuck men and women anyone who approach him and he dare to sqy our MC eho.is good lookimg is not his type author come one .mobjectively this jerk alpha is mediocree and NOC looking like supporting character NPC looking guy

The audacity of the author to be this lazy and IDGF is insulting reader intelligent sorry bye

It was fun and i laugh a lout but author streach the story too much and i think loos the nareative esp about the ability eater it like a prolong tv series where you need to give space ghey said development for other supporting character but lost the narrative bc the supportingncharacter satr bc famous sp the author stuck roudn and round what can be a plot with natural progressiom bc like agata christy style suspense innhere who is the allien it got trapped and lost the new tone in earlier chapter and getting boring so i stop reading the novel... that what happen when a novel a bit famous i think the author never planned to expanse the story but bc it get famous it kinda expanse to more chapter ... pet seenwhat they do with the wr comic ..the death of some supporting charavter come out out of no where just like audden bomb without even any hind and then it become a catalyst of the Protagonist but this ability eater hunter and the squid like a alien is too much to make beliveve...

So cuteee

Even when hyungnslept with hamin noq he is 180degree force flot by author suddunetlybmonogamous it is insultingnreqder intelligentnold habbit die hard unless likenjqkeyungnafter slep with dan he did not sleep around then we reader can acvept and make sense that he gradually change ... but if author make force plot when promicous ml just be innlove with MC for the shake of author without graduallly naturallybflow of the llot it is so unnaturla just like seunghoo Painter of the night he also blqck flag..hamin date your friend that 2Ml sad boy he is more relatable innreal life pick the friend not the hyung and never try to change playboy to be monogamous bc some can some just inntheir dna promiscous

Sadly majority ceo is old bald NOC ugly lookingnold man in RL this is escapism ....

I hink iam gonna pause and marinate..it just round and round and getting boring like the plot is not moving at all..too dragging..basically the same thing from 2 different point of views of 2 ml it can be shorten to loke 15 chapter until the manager resign ... iam getting bored..seriuosly it should be tag pdychological with so many inner monologue that some reader find broing and repetivie with sever OCF, panic attacr and germphobia ...