Bad naming sense aside... The storytelling could use some improvement, I'm pretty sure there are actual pages missing, but the pace in the pages themselves is really chaotic as well and only really works in the sex scenes. There's a lack of context and the scene transitions are really confusing and feels like a few steps are being skipped
I'm just gonna say this. It saddens me how easy it is for people to get mad at only Moa when literally all three of the main characters have fucked up big time. Neither Yura nor Yujin are saints. Also in case you didn't realise, Moa is in a vulnerable position after what happened at her last place, which would make it hard to get away and sort out her feelings even if she wanted to. Not an excuse, but a reason. Anyway maybe try to examine why you're only mad at Moa.
Ok but the real question to me is WHERE DOES SHE GET THE PERFUME BOTTLES lmao
She seems to be designing them if you look at her notes, but somehow the bottles just appear when she needs them? Does she have a private glassblower or something, or did she go through all that effort of drawing already existing bottles??? XD
You are right ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I suppose I just imagine that she design it and give them to someone specialized on glass like she has her favourite flower boy and all
Or maybe a mana aparatus?
Well that and the pine perfume was very simple
Right?? It could be that, but it bugs me that we don't get to see it haha, as it is the bottles just seem to appear out of thin air :')
this is what im thinking as well haha. it may be harder for the artist and writer but it can also add to the substance of the story on how she makes a perfume first (due to her being inspired by a lot of things/people), and then design the bottles too (choosing color/material/and shapes depending on target clients).
Yesss this! As someone who makes and sells items, packaging is a big part of the process, and it would be good to see that aspect of it addressed more. I mean, it's fine if the perfume business only is a vehicle for the romance that's about to happen, but I think there's so much potential to make the story more interesting if you dive deeper into the business side of things
Magic is real, so is talking snowman.
Jk aside, I think she make it herself. Maybe using magic since this world has magic element
I'm also in a designing type of work so I really enjoy reading characters making stuffs to sell, thinking of concept and such... perfume bottles are so beautiful, I'm not into perfumes but I enjoy looking at them (i think im also allergic because certain perfumes give me bad stomach ache), guessing the materials of bottle or what it's imitating, elegance, etc :D
I had this though too! I was actually going through scenarios of how she got the designed bottles. Does she order a collection and decide what perfume goes with them as she makes them? Did she design and mold the rose perfume topper herself?! I don't think we'll ever get these answers lol
I don't dislike Rebecca but she sure is a fool... she's basically shooting herself in the foot, because Killian is paying even more attention to Adele thanks to Rebecca trying to bully her lmao
excuse me sir, he WAS eating... eating your dick
(but fr, love a man who cares about his partner's wellbeing more than getting off!)
I just want to put this out there, just because the king is a "better man" doesn't mean Ingrid has to choose him :) Also, this king forced her to come with him and dance with him, which shows a lack of respect on a pretty basic level and like Ingrid says, he barely knows anything about her. Claiming that you can love someone forever after falling in love at first sight is naive. Don't get me wrong though, Ingrid is not that great either, and neither is Regan. I mean, heck, Ingrid preaches about being able to choose for herself, and while it's true that she should be able to, her choice came at Regan's expense, so she's a hypocrite. Even if he's falling in love with her now.
This is just a personal opinion but I don't think Joowon was the realistic ending. I'm not looking down on team Joowon at all btw, I just want to make that clear! It's just that from my personal experience if I went through that much shit with one person, I can't imagine moving forward with them. If anything, I think Haesoo needs to be on his own for a good while, and I mean like... years, probably. That's how long it took me to heal and be myself after a truly messed up relationship. Haesoo hasn't really experienced just being alone without any pressure from anyone yet, and I'd really like that for him even if he loves Joowon.
I was more for Taku as a partner, though he still has a lot of growing up to do too. But even then the timing was wrong.
Whether the ending was Joowon or Taku though, I wish it was after Haesoo had time to be by himself without either of them having a huge impact on his life. Heck, all of them could use being alone for a while after all of this. I mean, Joowon has also never not obsessed about Haesoo, so he could use a few years to just chill, and Taku has only just started to feel things the way other do, so he needs to mature more. In fact, they all need therapy too lol...
But either this is a very well written story. Frustrating, but well written.
I see where you’re coming from, and also agree to some extent, but I think for Haesoo and Jowoon, it might be good for them to actually be together, no lies, secrets, hiding their feelings from each other etc. I think they could be happy together and then growth together in that sense. But alone time is good too. It all depends on the person and how they go through and handle things.
Don't worry you will getting your wish in the next chapters. Also i bet your personal experience not really similar with this story. Haesoo choosing joowon is part of his growth. He admit his wrongdoing instead dump all the mistakes to joowon like the earlier chapters, he realized that joowon is in pain too instead thinking joowon have it all easy, and he bravely choose what he really want knowing it would be difficult with his mom and social pressure.
Drink every time ML says "beloved", "fiance", or a combination of both XD
But like..I don’t wanna die of alcohol poisoning lol
Idk... this ending feels very unsatisfying to me. I like Chiwoo with Kyujin but it just really bugs me that Kyujin doesn't realize why Chiwoo wasn't ready to go out with him, and he's very pushy. :( I'd just have liked to see him develop some emotional maturity first, and for Chiwoo to learn to communicate a bit better
I swear to god the ml is the biggest fucking red flag I would commit murder before he got even halfway through all the shit he's already said. A no is a no. This isn't banter, this is sexual harassment.
... But luckily this is fiction and I can enjoy hating him and enjoy the smut anyway lmao