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Okay first and foremost, this is great, the art is beautiful and the whole transmigation arc is not like the others, yes we got the clichè, where transmigator suddenly becomes the target of the main characters, however it truly feels like it's because of her merits and quick thinking skills. Second of all, i really appreaciate the author for not making this a fluffy love story, as we can see mc felt some affection to the emperor, however she, as probably most of us, couldn't look past that the ml could kill anyone and anywhere simply for his satisfaction. Would anyone believe from such a man, who enjoys hurting other people for fun, that he loves them. Lastly, i see a lot of complaints about the mc being spineless, but in my humble opinion, she is one of the most 3d and human like characters i've ever seen. As creatures with thinking, we fear a lot of things especially dying, so of course she feels fears the emperor, it's even highlighted why would anyone enjoy living a fairytale dream that's not real, she needed to wapk on eggshells all the time. And let's not forget that when you are presented with the task of killing another human and you are painfully aware, that they are inhumanely stronger than you, of course you'd feel not up to the task.
To conclude, i love the story for being a bit more realistic that were pumped out in recent years and how we actually face moral dillemas , especially how it's portrayed through mc.
All my fellow people, please stop saying the main character is stupid, the whole writing of this piece falls flat, the ending can be guessed by reading the first five chapters, I doubt the author will bring never seen before plot-twist, but with all that in mind, saying that the main character is stupid simply because he is stubborn and doesn't want help from a manipulative person is short-sighted. Media suffers from people illiteracy and it seems like this is the proof of that. A person that acted like you were a prostitute, didn't respect you in the past, tries to make moves on you now even though you asked to stop, simply because they think that they are on top of the world, you mean to tell me you would agree to their help? I'm not saying this is a classic or a work that shpuld be held high, but do we really need everything spelled out(even though it was spelled out and highlighted how the main character feels). PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, try to think how the character would feel in the moment, just because there is an undying need for romance, it wouldn't make sense for him to just be happy with the situation. I hope some of the readers in the future try to see things from the characters perspective and understand it. I'm not trying to say that people are stupid, but the comments lack real critique, just because there's a dislike to character writing, doesn't mean there is a need to parrot the comments, about how annoying are the characters. I hope anyone who reads has a fantastic day.
I agree, but the he's always sick ohmygosh, so why not use that mf of an ml instead although I hate him too but if he kept going like this he'll end up dead leaving his son. Just use him until he got better, there's no other way since he's rejecting other alpha pheromones. Or communicate with him or establish a rule or draw a line just so that he could heal himself. He's so weak physically I mean, if he kept being stubborn he'll only hurt himself.
With a PFP of the sacred of Mary, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD (￣∇￣")
With a PFP of the sacred heart of Mary, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD (￣∇￣")
Hahahahahha that's on point
I understand and know that it's frustrating to see him not accepting help, however he's weak not only physically, but mentally too, and as far as the writing goes, he, kind of, understands that about himself, that's why he's still trying to keep himself far away from that man, and since this is only the start, i think it's well done, first, because of his priciples, we see him abusing suppresants and trying to use other alphas phermones, i would prefer that he would keep at it, it would make him more convincing, so for example we see him faint for the last time and it's the big bad, that man learns of it(BECAUSE OF COURSE HE DOES MAGICALLY USING HIS CHEABOL POWER) and tries QUIETLY help main character. It will not make a remarkable story, but it would give time for characters to breathe without each other and showing that the male lead is trying to fix his wrongdoings. Because let's be realistic these two wimps will end up together. On a separate note if anyone wants to give recommendations where the first HORRIBLE love interest is tossed aside i'm open to it. And for anyone needing that this one left quite the impression on me: the god of pains groom. Just read with caution don't remember it very well but love seeing the dynamics as far as is rmemeber. Probably some cringy parts and a bit of a predictable plot but appreaciative none the less.
thank you for noticing. You will be in my prayers
him not accepting the help he needs doesn’t put him at risk but also his child. i understand where you’re coming from but the mc also has a child that needs support.
As I was saying I like that part of him being stubborn like that but it will be useless if he turns up in heaven leaving his son since it's his health on the line. What I want to say is that it's not bad if he accepts his help but clearly make a boundary between them, and to tell you the truth this ml is not super red flag (well just a red flag, redeemable) like other alpha ml you know since they are not in relationship when they did the deed. It's just that he hasn't realized that he is still longing for the mc or he has feelings for him, it's the communication and the realization and acceptance of the feelings.