Grum's Topics (38)

this authors works have become my guilty pleasure like kirk me right now cause i see myself rereading these

I just started the side stories and the friends pissed me off. Cause wdym you're bringing up an ex partner infront of Ash's new partner without Ash bringing the old partner up himself!!! Especially since it's their house warming party and also the first time the friends are meeting Karlyle, it's completely inconsiderate of Karlyles feelings and the friends don't know if Ash has even mentioned his past relationships to Karlyle. AND THEN after Ash talked to the guy that brought it up saying please dont talk about this under my roof (not actually those words but come on read the room) The dumbass goes and blabs about it the next morning causing Karlyle to feel insecure in himself and fight with Ash.
Idk I would never do that to my friends esp if it was my first time meeting their partner...

That is not how Hawai'i looks

watch where you're aiming that thing it's coming straight for us!!!

Not the worst omegaverse I have read. Kinda sucked that choi almost got graped twice... (not by jiheon)
Both of them communicated and explained where their feelings were. Only when choi found out he was preggos did he hide it.
ALSO that doctor needs to be fired!! cause wdym you're outing patient information without the patients consent HIPPA violation much.
Translation is a bit messy but easy to look pass

Okay I think Jiheon being at the campground and smiling down on home boy is a misdirect.
I think that is was prof cha during the kidnapping scene and the actual stalker at the campground.

Honestly this story has its good parts but it does drag in some parts. I kinda wish this was an omegaverse cause it would make more sense imo. I also don't think the daughter should have been so soon cause I feel like she is also with the nanny and we hardly see them just being parents. I was hoping the author would bring back the nickname Seowon gave Aiden but the author completely forgot about it. There really is no conflict so if you want an easy read with no thought then give this one a read. It would have been nice to know how Seowons mom passed but we never really got the story.

For startes it is nice to see an omega stand up for themselves and take hold of the power that they have been given.
Plot is super basic and easy to follow. Miscommunication seems to be the driving point and all of this could have been resolved with a conversation. I feel like the time jump was too long cause none of them matured since being in High School. I understand being 19 and thinking you know everything but come on it's been 7 years they should have matured somewhat yk.
I was not a fan of Mugwart getting a whole chapter and skipped the whole thing cause come on why would I care about what he was feeling!!!
If you're bored give it a read cause there are some funny parts and it's a fairly easy read

Spoiler free part: I highly recommend reading this story! It starts off slow but it draws you in and makes you want more. Slight angst but nothing too heavy

I haven't seen this dynamic in a yaoi and it's really refreshing to see. I loved the start with the kitchen wars and I kinda wish it went on longer but the devastation of not seeing him win and the downward spiral afterwards. I'm glad they took their time to get to know each other after Yoon picked himself back up and was ready to face his emotions yk.

Side note F that Tic Tac dude or whatever his bitchass name is. If Gyun wasn't on the phone with Yoon then Gyun would have been crushed I wanted to see that dude suffer for leaving him under the bookshelf, like dude couldn't have calle 911 or lifted the bookshelf up for him....

Never have i ever seen a bottom give head, pretend swallow the tops cum and then spew the cum into the tops mouth, that ish was hilarious