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Although the drama and angst is there, I can't help but see the fluff of how Kentryle and Mary unknowingly builds a family together. I'm already halfway and I think I have a hunch why it's titled as Childcare Diary with the Villain. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
There are too many red flags that adds drama and angst, so it would have been better if it is longer and the redemption arc is more precise. I truly get the FL being so apprehensive, yet kept on falling for the ML. Unless it's a story with Stockholm Syndrome, it's kind of insufficient, leaving the ending a little hanging.