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1: This feels....really rushed. The novel i don't think was this rushed? Its been a while since i read it though.I don't remember all these little sex scenes happening? Their first time was when Gye was on the edge of a rampage after saving Wonwoo and teleporting them so that part i do remember. I could have sworn their first time having penetrative sex was in a house in the woods that Yoon later purchased because the MC liked it. It became their secret spot to run away and have sex.
2: Before anyone screams rape i want you to know these 2 consensually have very rough sex together - wonwoo likes being dominated. He enjoys the manhandling - you see this a lot more when you read his thoughts.
100% agree
Who else had to pause a second at the author saying dangly bits lmao. Super serious trauma chapter gave me whiplash when i read that part.