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honestly this is a very satisfying read. I get that some part of the plot is too fast paced like it just happened like how owen killed the duke and got his spirit. and it feels the death of owen is anticlimatic, I want moreee scenes of his suffering or like what he actually saw/feel when somnia made him a madman.
THE ENDING??? SOOO SATISFYING!! it's also realistic and valid when a relationship was already broken into pieces considering how long the pain they've been through, both of them. they had to find and accept on themselves first before they find each other again. I also love how theo agreed to give lily space and time to focus on herself first. and when theo accept himself and finally heal himself from his pain from the day his parents and brother died. this is a good development from the main couple. I loveee it
and when that ghost from the pit was reincarnated as their daughter, I'm so happy that she finally reborn into a family that love and accept her now
why is she even cruel to his brother? he's a ball of sunshine and love his sister. she's really just jealous afterall because his brother is not even a bad person. arrghh the love and attention she's been wanting from her father, his brother is just giving it all to her everyday. I thought she would realize that in her second life
and she's all over theon. I wish she would appreciate ray the same way she is to theon
and forget the father. he's useless and just so annoying and a really bad father. does he ever get a character development as well? even so he's the root of this all and why dorothy became like that in her first life. i hate the father