Seriously, can Shizuru just be rendered useless already? Not dead, she needs to freaking pay for killing so many ppl for her own gain. Why doesn't Auriel (prefer this version of her name over Ariel) maybe have some kind of leech skill or decay that makes skills of other ppl ineffective? It would be soooo satisfying to have the deadbeat grovel at Seah's feet.
I really like this story, I reread it a few times already.. However, my pet peeve are those kisses - they feel so tame and meh, chaste almost (not sure anything can beat "Reunion" in that regard)... Also not enough smut, but that's just cause I'm a horny deviant xD
Found better words than tame/chaste... The kisses felt flat
the kissing, the smut - I didn't feel it either. I mean it was well done but something was missing...
oh, and nothing beats Reunion anyway
I have an idea of what's missing - passion. This all feels very surface level.
Not like the raw emotions in Reunion you could feel jumping at you from the panels. I get shivers just thinking about it. And the part with the reason for amnesia is so intense... I want to read it again, but I'm scared at the same time, if you know what I mean.
I totally get you. What happened in Reunion was so breathtaking. It's been months since I reread it and it still leaves me speechless (again).
As for the passion, yes, might be the right word for it. I generelly prefer the love (and smut) scenes with less or no talking, just seeing the faces and getting the vibe. And I do understand that getting these feelings across must be a really hard task for the author...
People who upload troll posts as chapters should get at least shadow banned. Readers, who use this platform, cause they can't afford to buy the titles, depend on others graciously uploading, risking consequences for themselves and then you get people like aetherious who do this bs, cause it's "funny".. Sorry kid, it's not, grow up and get a hobby that doesn't impact other's methods of relaxation or a temp escape from their harsh reality