beta
Really interesting characters and a plot but it seems like they gave up halfway through. The story just became confusing with random smut scattered around. Would've loved to see this story fleshed out in a 60+ chapter series too bad ╥﹏╥
Pretty ok story I guess but it just kinda made me sad and it felt like we didn’t get much of a resolution. The brother just ends up sad and alone and I would've enjoyed a better ending for jace. Like if jase have a longer chasing arch and then came to the conclusion that he needs to be honest with himself. It would have been better to see him move on after making some sort of apology. Also I really wanted to see Eric become successful and see his after college career.