where is this story going? Lol, don't waste my time... I liked it but nah I come back when it's done.
I might be wrong, but does anyone else feel like the plot moves extremely stagnant? Every time I finish a chapter, I struggle to point to what actually happened or what really changed. It is not that nothing is shown, but it rarely feels like we are experiencing real progression.
A lot of the story seems to be told through isolated statements, internal thoughts, or behaviors instead of actual conversations or clear developments. Because of that, it feels like I have to piece the plot together afterwards like a puzzle rather than following a naturally unfolding narrative.
Maybe that is intentional storytelling, but for me it makes the reading experience confusing and emotionally distant, because key moments or relationship developments rarely happen through real back and forth interactions.
Checking out again — the first half was nice, but the second half is rubbish. The 9.2 rating needs to be lowered — the plot is chaotic. The main characters have no depth. I don't know what the intention with this plot change was. I'd give it a 6 in rating... A for effort