beta
The MC's emotional development was a little lacking, but I think that's partly due to his personality. He's a fairly reserved character, so his growth feels a bit subtle. That said, I still enjoyed it. The pacing was actually pretty good compared to most short manhwas, and I liked that the story didn't feel overly focused on the smut either.
very well said. I also think the same. it’s lacking something but at the same time already good enough.
This would've been perfect if they switched