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May Day was hilarious but it has been a while since I read it. I remember reading this one right after May Day and I was appalled at how much the ML changed in term of looks. I remember I could not finish this because of how Goofy the Ml seemed but the story if I remember correctly was better. It went more into their dynamic and relationship and I remember I was kinda touched when the Ml lost his memories he offered to bottom as a way for the MC to have a special first time memory with this version? It’s kinda confusing ik but there is this whole thing by anyhow it was even funnier but also more serious and I liked it but I can’t go past the art.
What a stupid story. For something like this to work it needs to be well executed but this was rushed, underdeveloped and just raw. The characters are confusing because you don’t get to see their minds or really get to know them at all and their motivations are unknown. The plot is very basic and it tries to be a psychological story but fails miserably because again it’s not developed enough cuz it so short. You can kinda understand the MC but man