"put on some weight and be more appetizing" BRUH! this is NOT the time to be sarcastic!?? hes scared shitless and you are petty/childish AND lockhim up!???
Im still gonna read this til the end but NO WAY IN HELL am i gonna forgive him that! there is NO excuse for shit like this ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
dear god my eyes are melting!
there couldn't possibly be any water left in my body after reading this!
MAN that was a waste of my time^^°
and the art is somehow good and bad at the same time?
Like, is it just me or do their faces rarely change expressions?? and their bodies always look stiff as hell! like someone drew over 3D models for each and every scene....idk
The whole thing just lacked emotion for me. at least visually.
The story has a nice idea but is confusing and weirdly paced at a lot of times
this could be good if they dont focus to much on fanservice. hopefully that story is good
the story and characters are so cuuute and it was a fun read! but never in my over 15years of reading all kinds of yaoi have i ever seen armpit fucking like that! XD
normally im really put off by them licking there and stuff but THAT was hot!??
im way to old to find new kinks! HELP! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
this is super interesting but also suuuper boring at the same time??
i found myself just scrolling through the chapters after chapter 20 i think?
i read the important parts so i do understand the story and the concept is really cool. but the whole manga is just really boring for some reason... dropping this
whaaaat!!! the status says completed, but it suddenly stops!!????
MAN! how could you do that to little unassuming me? i was totally prepared for a nice smooth ending but got thrown out suddenly QwQ
okay...i am very open for unhinged things but...this wasnt good. i thought it might get better, but noooope. bad til the end
oooh a traitor! what a mysteryyyyyaaaaand we know who it is....
DAMN that must have been the quickest traitor reveal ever :`D
after reading everything i now re-read the first chapter and im VERY concernet what will happen D`:
i just want them to be happy but everything went to shit so fast nd apparently it will only get worse... lord have mercy for these boys QAQ
theo just dropping that bombshell so casually ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
"help us!"
kid....just get adopted by the dude and live with the humans now- no way in hell is he going back (i hope)!!!
man... i kindo hoped itchi would get octo bomb. they would be so fun together....but eh, at least lil dude is still in the team i guess
dear god i was really scared for a second for these two!!
my first reaction was "HE DID NOT!!!!" but then they came back and i just slumped back into my chair XD
loki is another case of a villain made by man. he just became what everyone expected of him! poor lil dude...i hope luffy can help him to heal his heart Qmq
















