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Good...but being short it lacked way too much, missing a lot of emotional issues to be handled and no real connection of taking care of those situations. Glossed over and completed, boom, all good, nah haha but I liked the story and characters. Shoulda have been more chaps to make this a solid enjoyable story but as is it just feels bland to me.
Good. I liked all 3 mains. It just so happened that Raita was more mature and Fuuta being a yr younger showed his immaturity. It's a simple, easy going story that is a short, not a lot of depth other than what surfaced were the real feelings of one brother. Author took one bro on a trip cause he knew he was not mature enough and had to leave for the sake of the other 2. Signs of maturity starting also. I liked this story, art is nice, wish it had more depth but I felt chem between the couple and this was a good solid read for me. Like others mentioned wish a few more chaps to show them as a couple cause I think that Kasusa is gonna eat Raita alive lol