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this was horrendous, the author fails to employ serious and dark themes like coercion, slavery responsibly, this is just fetishized abuse. at times the author makes the his promiscuity disturbing, but the conclusion left me baffled. the worldbuilding was underused. this story had the potential to explore coercive themes yet it leans into fetishism. the mc is never show to have developed in character.
this was horrendous, the author fails to employ serious and dark themes like coercion, slavery responsibly, this is just fetishized abuse. at times the author makes lev's promiscuity disturbing, but the conclusion of the story left me baffled. the worldbuilding was underused. this story had the potential to explore coercive themes yet it leans into fetishism. the mc is never shown to have developed in character.
Indeed, I agree with each word.