so I just binged the current chapters and I have some thoughts? no hate to the author, it's hard to write and draw your own comic and eungyo is cute but this is just not... very good. I'm not necessarily expecting good writing from a manwha (but I have read some masterpieces.)
In the first place this is a comedy and I already know this story requires suspension of belief, but it's so badly written that its kind of distracting and hard to read! Even though its a bit alarming to say the least, I actually don't dislike the concept/plot! it's definitely supposed to be absurdist but that doesn't mean it gets a pass though. It's not the worst comic I ever read but
the biggest issue is there's too much exposition!! The characters repeat them selves too much and there's too many flashbacks. like I just read this, you don't have to tell me what happened again. They spent 5 more chapters just talking about what happened in chapter 2. They characters spend too much time talking about what just happened or what they should do instead of actually doing anything and continuing the plot. There's 14 chapters out now but it could have been cut to like 7 or so.
It's not all bad though, the jokes land *most* of the time and the imagery is interesting. the mc and ml actually have good chemistry and I do want to see more of them together! and the ml is pretty too...
anyway I might seem crazy writing this long review about such an unserious story that I'm reading for free but I just wanted to share my thoughts as a student who studies illustration, animation, and comics! I'm gonna keep reading because I do wanna see where this is going... (￣∇￣")
also the eugenics in this story is crazy.
Taeseo is so stupid that it's kind of refreshing! I like him a lot
you mean to tell me this man got bonked on the head with a metal paperweight and didn't die???
if they say the title doesn't that mean its gonna end soon ╥﹏╥
wait which language are these two even speaking to eachother??
I think I'm in the minority here but this is really good!?
#1-34 contain smut!
— criteria —
‣ female is DOMINANT aka initiates/takes the lead in the relationship.
‣ STRONG, UNBOTHERED & CAPABLE women.
‣ reverse gender roles or not a "typical" m/f relationship.
‣ boy gives off soft boi energy & tends to be much more shy & passive.
— femdom —
feminine dominance (also refers to femdom in a BDSM relationship).
i would appreciate it if you recommended this list（‐＾▽＾‐）!
enjoy~ and get ready for some blushing bois! ♡ (/^▽^)/
Thanks for starting to upload the official chapters!