Once in a while i indulged myself to read a dense fl and this story got it myghod. I'll hog all MLs to myself cause she doesn't deserve one! I don't see any redeeming qualities in here. She's so dense that the ML is suffering. The only good parts were the MLs, FL rival, ML's suffering face and ungodly hands GADDAMIT









I understand why some comments hate the ML for not listening to her during sex. But the whole story is so damn cute and the smut is okay (expressions are drawn well too). ML is so loca for her for the last 2 decades and i understand that his pent up sex frustration with her made him like a rabbit lol. We could have seen more dating outside of sex but the author just pointed out how bad they communicate about sex. Also there are panels where he was entranced with her look that he can't stop loving her. Honeymoon phase is real.
My favorite scene was the flashback where he's encouraging her while she tapped her finger to his hand in the bed. That interaction felt sincere. I thought, it's one of the instances where the ML has had her close yet so far.