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Ok I read it in one go, and it is me or the dialogue it's kidna off (with no offence to the translators, I do apreciate all the work done). I just feel like some sentences were weird or like strange, like something was missing or just kinda the peace seemed off. Not only in the dialogue but in the stroy and characters, like one moment they are on something and boom! the other moment doesn't link well. Maybe it's kinda like I don't cath pretty well the congruence. Am I alone in this? Then again no offence to the hard work of translators I know you work hard and I'm gratefull for that .
I think it's just you lol
Well maybe, it's just that sometimes no matter how many times I read like I feel something was missing or just jumping to fast. Like when his friend was worry for him and say he was asking around to people. This part felt to me kinda strange I do understand the intention that was going to but still... I didn't sink well
Ok maybe i'm missing something but the clothes were different in those chapters and it not like is another day. I also dont understand what are they are talking in the beggining. Can someone iluminate this little brain?