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Oh? A new couple? Love is in the air~
Resis I believe in you! (*≧ω≦)

Hello! I decided to give a review each chapter, it just came to me as I was reading the new chapter and said why not, plus this story deserves more recognition ( ＾ω＾ )

I'll try not to give any spoilers just a general review of each chapter! If I do end up giving a spoilers I'll put the warning (*ゝω･*)

Also it's my first time commenting, usually I just read without saying anything, and English is not my first language so please be understanding (T▽T)

• Chap.0 - It just serves as a prologue, and is actually part of chap.1 so isn't really necessary

• Chap.1 - Good introduction for the general view of the world and gives an idea of where the story could be heading, also give us a look at the main characters and their relations

• Chap.2 to 4 - I decided to mix it all, cus I don't really remember the details of chap.2 and 3 and chap.4 can just be added to it.
So it's actually just a more in-depth look at the characters and a little bit of backstory (really not that much), also we see the development of the relation between the couple and the children!

In general : This story is really good so far. The chapters might be a little short and the fact that the couple is already established made some concerns to some people, such as what will the story be about, but I don't agree.
Yes, I see this story as type of parenting story wich is already good! But we can also see some plot being established with the focus on the children and the situation of the world.
Though I do wish to see a little bit more of backstory, even more so for the couple and how they met. But we're only at the beginning, maybe it will be addressed later on.

I might not actually do it for each chapter as I might not know what to talk about, but we'll see! And thank you for your time! (^-^*)

Hello! I decided to give a review each chapter, it just came to me as I was reading the new chapter