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Kittkatdoll September 3, 2020 11:41 pm

At the end the main female dies and the dude broke but I didnt feel satisfying at all. The story itself had no cohesive story line and the characters where all just bad. Like they had not likable qualities.They were awful. The way that they were written caused me to not feel anything when they were tortured or died. For example the main lead, the way she was written did make me feel bad for her until she started getting obsessed about the main dude.

I feel like if she would have instead began to hate him and blame him for what she went through and wanted revenge it would have been a better story.

Or maybe if she in the end betrayed him and just shot him with a blank face.

Or had turned out to be an assassin herself who wanted intel about the company or even to destroy the company form the inside by causing the main dude problems like she did but instead the problems were intentional.

Or maybe just had asked for divorce instead of lying about the affair.

ITS NOT JUST HER WHO IS A WASTED CHARACTER! ITS MOST OF THEM!

Also what's with everybody lives having rape involved. Like I understand wanting to make the characters be traumatized and cause trauma but can you at least be more creative.
I feel like this story focused more on the sex scenes than the actual plot.

In short, this is a story that makes me ask the what ifs. What if it didn't suck? What if the character were better written? What if this character had been less willing to see sex as the only solution/escape option?

It is a disappointment.

Kittkatdoll September 18, 2019 7:21 pm

I felt this story had potential and it's a shame that they ended it early.

    JJ12 September 18, 2019 10:01 pm

    I though it would be longer but I don’t really care it took forever to update

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