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Good, I hope Undertaker perfects the moving corpses. I want to see the concept of souls collapse in on itself. The beauty of it is, it all comes from the weaponized mind of a madman and stands on its own merit without the use of magic. God, I love Undertaker! That is all.
But that's beside the point. This is a purely erotic one shot, therefore, plot driven narrative and back story aren't of paramount importance. Excitement of the senses rather than the intellect is the objective, and it has been achieved. I'm also a sucker for the affection between the two of them and the long hair just sweetens the pot. Ok. Break time is over.
That is so true, it may be a one shot. But, the author got a lot out of its readers. I for one, really enjoyed reading it and the long hair.