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Holy shit veyrareads sucks so much. Like already bad enough to be an ai translation, but you gotta cut the comic in between 5 different times to promote your group? I thought the chapter was ending, then it kept going on, it just makes reading a pain
It keeps getting worse and worse, they need to do Something
If your flashbacks are longer than 3 chapters you failed as an author idgaf
I agree ngl like yes we get it he was in a fucked up situation can we go back to present now
Usually id agree but this is interesting asf I'm a sucker for flashbacks of the MC and ml as kids
Mfs want a fleshed out story but complain when the author tries to develop a backstory.
Right? it’s structured development bro
Lit bruh like if you're complaining then get your ass to writing atp
You dont need to put all their childhood at the same time, is way more interesting and engaging to do it little bits at a time. Also i hate the "they knew each other from childhood" trope, so overused and here it wasnt frigging necesary.
Nah it's interesting ur attention dpams just ass
Oop meant span
This is probably the most ass take i’ve ever seen
dropthis bruh wtf is this take