Whatisdis's Manga

so far this is ao good but it's making me anxious on how amazing things are going, because... wtf?? It seems OFF

thus is so good ion wanna read it dawg

why hes so self centered

I was wondering where did people get this kind of story ideas. About a game where it can turn your life upside down, it'll cost you, your life and ofcourse there is someone watching over you.

Omniscient Reader Viewpoint also got a similar jiz as this one, then I remembered. Its fucking Squid game, yall got it from there, so now I understand.

alright

Art 9/10, would be 10/10 if the artist wasn't obviously a male with some weird ahh fantasy, why do you keep drawing girls really weirdly, who tf leans forward and arch their back checking their phone.

Storytelling 7/10, u suck, I get it, easier to show then explain later, but u took too long before explaining, I'm confused for so long.

Story 8/10, pretty basic atp, but not bad, its good.

Characters 5/10, you fail at making me like anyone else but the mc.

Arcs? Idk the before paradise arc was good 8/10, but now as soon as he hit paradise, its boring, its just like any other mmorpg manhwas out there 6/10 bweh.

Honestly, I only like the ml that's why I'm reading it, I barely have any interest in the story at all

kinda slow.

the Netflix series is amazing, the art on this is ehh. Iv every cultivation manhua is like this