Whatisdis's Manga

Story 8/10 : Very well thought out.

Storytelling 7/10 : don't get me wrong it's not bad, it's just there are some unnecessary part, there are things that didn't need to happen or just didn't need explanation, I mean I can always skip it.

Characters 9/10 : the two lead of the story is actually interesting and smart. They act human, they feel anxious, lonely, scared, afraid, confident, the author portrays their emotion really well without really spelling it out. I find that really enjoyable throughout this author's previous work it was also like that.

Art 10/10, I like the sparkles, the anatomy is great.

Characters 9/10, it seems rushed so I don't know much about the 2 side Characters, their relationship was interesting too.

Plot 4/10, barely any plot, just a bunch of yaoi, the sex scene is good because author doesn't show all of it start to finish so it didn't feel repetitive .

how hard is it to not have sex in every 5 chapters, I'm done.

Art 10/10, it's good, anatomy is great, Its a bit basic but its still amazing art.

Plot 3/10, everything is predictable, I don't see any conflicts that's actually urgent, I don't like how naive everyone is. How come the "cold" duke himself is as soft as a butter but also naive.

The rape too, ok I get rape scenes for conflicts but the fact the Duke did it? The Duke, the mf who loves him. Holy fuck??? the fact that there's so many unnecessary misunderstanding too.

bruv reading mangas are so difficult

"tanaka san~~~" my ass lol

It failed showing the personality of the mc, literally no fights, he basically kidnapped the dude, he didn't complain even once. After the confession he said yes right away.

It fails into showing human real emotions such as doubts, which is important, when I read this I felt like I'm reading a story of a shrimp dating.

Just so wholesome :>

The only thing that carried in this story is the personality and the comedic timing. It's funny how carefree the mc is at expressing his feelings, its funny how bad the ml is expressing his.

I wouldn't say the plot is good and well thought, but I get that this is just a light bl.

27, honestly I dropped it got boring.

Mc is ur secret assassin, I thought this would put some into fun conflicts, but nope.

The art is trash, a quick tip :
1. don't use too thick of an outline unless its to emphasize something.
2. don't only use bright colors, when u shade u don't just use a darker color, color theory comes into play.
3. hair, hair is difficult, try changing the artstyle into a more solid hair and easy to draw.

Amount of times I've re read this (6).

Alright it's fair to say I'm obsessed with this artist, but anyways.

Story 10/10, everything is well paced out, the flashbacks everything is good.

Characters 10/10, I even like how they make the villains Personality, even sunBAE sunBAE YES IKR, he's good. I didn't expect him to be that trash but I love his villains arc. I do wish I can see more of his back story but i guess the artist didn't want us to feel bad for the dude. It's a good idea actually.

Art 10/10, never misses, idk why thus author should be an action writer it's too good.

Overall this is a good Manhwa one of the first 10/10 out there.

its ongoing

Another case of a writer that fails me into being intrigued by the plot, I know it has a good plot but I have no way of knowing if its good, if the writer didn't make me interested by it.

I feel like some it's trying too hard to be depressing, which I get, but sometimes I feel like it'd be better without the whole rape, forced sex thing.

I know trauma troupe is popular these days, but on this manhwa particularly it literally does not need it.

plot wise it is interesting there are some funny bits but the way it's translated is kinda giving me second hand embarrassment

I already forgot about this, that's how bland this is.