ellie

LMFAOOO

prob cause back at the middle the story was good. Then you get the omega preg out of nowhere with no sense of responsability and shaitzy character development at the other half/end of the story. Now I've spent 78 chapters, I just wanna see the ugly baby tbh XDD she's very bad at drawing toddlers
I actually like how the author starts the idea in her other works, and even this one, but she's very bad with the final execution of the story. Part of the process I guess...

I'm not one of these people cause I haven't started reading yet, but I just wanted to say that hate reading something is its own kind of enjoyment

I understand but it does get annoying sometimes when people are trying to criticize other people who do enjoy the story

that’s true, sometimes stories just fall flat after executing a storyline and running out of ideas.

sort of, but it's also a way to learn. Most people learn from mistakes, I like reviewing. when somethin is bad, it may a matter of perception, or it can be because structurally is poorly elaborated.
It's part of the process, I'd read for sure her next works, cause I think she has potential... I like more "a man who gives it all" the most.

He was not preg "out of nowhere". Bro was bustin nuts like he was in competition for hoe many nuts you can bust in one person.

Listen, I recently read a whole damn toxic and straight up bad novel only because I absolutely had to share my review of it on novelupdates once I finished.
Would’ve dropped it if I force myself to review it only bc the ones already there glorified it to the point of making me read it.

In other words- I got brainwashed into starting it and so rage baited I finished and reviewed

No genuinely this. Like strong start and then they just absolutely trash the plot… it’s so noticeable when you can tell they don’t know how to finish a story. Like we got through so much character development… we round to the end of the story and they suddenly do a personality switch? No. Saying you’re sorry doesn’t make you Main love interest of the year. It’s crappy writing.

the thing is that at first it was showing the regular adolescent drama... I was totally ok with that. Now, why the damn baby? That's the turning point where she's trying to add somehing deep out of it... in reality, -and what it looks forced- is that not only they are "growing" as a couple, but the baby is helping them out...
My mom will be slapping me if I get the same outcome XD... that try of the author is trash...

I think it’s because it had a strong start and people are wondering why it deteriorated so much from chapter to chapter, and most likely are holding out hope that it will improve (which I’ve seen happen plenty of times with different stories). At the end of the day, if they’re earnestly reading it and not just commenting blindly, they’re allowed to be critical and honest about what they think.