The idea isn’t too bad.. just too short to fully flesh it out and be good?
Also dude why do they say Sammy is smart and good at what he does, JUST TO MAKE HIM A DUMBASS
I’m all for women rekindling their spark and I’m fine with older fls. Even if I can’t relate, I still enjoy them.
This just felt weird as hell, she’s known this kid forever, thinks of him as her daughters boo, doesn’t even give it more than a three second thought till she’s in sex land and it’s just weird he fell for a motherly figure imo?? Like I doubt you truly know her that well. IDK how to explain it but just imagine the roles reversed.
The side couple had way less chapters and did a way better job
The comments are making it sound like mc got cucked, which I am not a fan of… I don’t wanna ruin my peaceful mind if that’s so because no matter what whether it’s gareth or jack, I hear both of them wanted violet and violent is NOT the mc if im correct??