To be honest i think this story sucked. Don't get me wrong i loved the sex and stuff but i don't think he should have ended with up the doctor. I feel like this story is missing something.
...Like an extra chapter between 4 and 5 lol. All of a sudden Tomoya is agitated (he was fine after the 3some in chapter 4) over Keigo as if he had been rejected (this is before it became official)
Yeah thats whats missing
Is it just me or does anyone else like when the uke arch their backs when they feel really good?
You're not alone, my friend
truly, that is one of the things i look for in some of my favorite authors/yaois (づ￣ ³￣)づ
The arch back and when their feet twitches or when they clench their hand on the sheets omg like what kind of heaven are these guys feeling
SEXY AF I KNOW. (づ￣ ³￣)づ
yes! yes! can't forget the feet...! ヾ(☆▽☆)
Ugh that was so fucking adorable. I cant handle this right now i wish there was more
Well that escalated quickly. How is it that is was all cute and shit then it went BAM heres some psychos for you.ಠ_ಠ
Aye how could you end the chapter like that?
It wouldn't surprise me if the next chapter was a skip forward, then we can only see a peek in a flashback.
God that would suck. I hate when they do that so we cant see the juicy details