Honestly your translations aren't bad and they're not enough to annoy me or take me ojt of the experience of reading so go ahead and continue translating if u want ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
I feel like maybe the ex is suspicious since she chose to retire from a major law firm. She could just stay at her cushy job so why leave? Is she trying to get zaizen back again or does she genuinely want to help?
A lot of successful lawyers (or in other jobs, like the ones working in restaurants, bar...) leave their "safe" job in order to go independent and be their own boss once they have the money, success and connection needed.
Just went on Tapas to read it and it was totally free. The series isn't complete yet and the author does have a patreon for early access of chapters. So if you want to support the author you can read it for free on tapas or pay $$ for early access if you can't be patient.
I did not fimd it on tapas
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I hope this helps :)
https://m.tapas.io/episode/1722696
You can also read it on webtoon. That's where i read this and i'm hungry for more hahahahaha
Thanks (=・ω・=)