beta
I mean I get the whole story but the plot seems too rushed, the dialogue is confusing and the lack of explanation about the side characters, it's makes me confused (and curious).
Also, if I remember correctly in earlier chapters Keith mentioned that he have a brother right? when Dane appeared I thought he was the brother but seeing their interaction it seems that they're not brothers.
Aww is this the only manga by kimiko uehara uploaded here? I was hoping Mari-chan is available here too