The story is well-written and exciting. Unfortunately, some pages were uploaded incorrectly. I had to read them somewhere else, and unfortunately, they were also incorrect there at some point. It’s interesting that they were incorrect here as well.
The pages that didn’t match were 103, 110, and 116.
Page 104 is missing.
I can’t say whether the pages after or between those matched, since I continued reading elsewhere.
The art style is good. The story has something going for it, but for me there were too many gaps in the plot. You're reading a scene, and suddenly you get the feeling that you've missed something or didn't understand it, because a new scene has popped up.