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It has been a few chapter now that the heroine has become a passive airhead the second one of her harem appear in the story.
Isn't she supposed to be a "real" ancient person? (As in not a modern girl that time traveled) Why the fuck is she letting a guy appear in her private quarter without reaction (which is very disturbing even for modern people)? Why the fuck are her harem members literally fighting and destroying her house just for her attention is... Funny?
A least before (childhood arc) she communicated with the characters, explaining what is okay and not okay. But since the white hair guy appeared she just ... Accepts everything? With just a tired/annoyed expression? And iwe need to be okay because it's cute/funny that they're jealous or just... A rude asshole that thinks being pushy/forceful is charming ? (And a creep with his stalker cat)
I think I'm really dropping this now.
I mean, the 3 guys are not good enough for her. But *currently* Yayul felt like the less disrespectful.
One is a creep, who doesn't now the first thing about consent. Invade her bedroom without authorization, touch her, hug her... And I still can't get past the stalker cat.
The other is a sweet boy, but still a macho guy. Who sees her as a trophy he needs to win by fighting his rivals. She's the damsel in distress ~
And the last one is a twisted trauma boy, who has his humanity still downloading.
But feels like the only one who actually respect her as a full person? In this chapter, he didn't follow her in secret but appeared in front of her asking if he could come with her. Didn't try to tell her/order her not too go because it was too dangerous.
Like... Theyre all meh but the last one feels less wrong. And I loved their bond as children. But now she acts like another person with him?
She just accepted the other two destroying her own quarter in a prideful fight she never asked for. And it was passed as a joke.
But here she feels more disgusted by Yayul (her oldest friend, who she accepted even after their past life) guarding her quarters (loitering) than when White Boy (a random guy who manipulated her into obeying him since day one) decided to APPEAR IN HER OWN BEDROOM IN SECRET.
Author, seriously what is going on? The boys are not good, but your heroine is not making any sense.
She's a badass woman who talks about the power of women but let boys walk all over her 24/7.
AUTHOR.
PLEASE.
WHITE HAIR CAN SEE AND HEAR THROUGH HIS CAT.
HE'S NOT CUTE. IT'S NOT FUNNY. PLEASE STOP MAKING HIM APPEAR AS SOME KIND OF ML IT'S DISGUSTING.