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I can’t describe this any other way than garbage. The plot feels rushed and all over the place, something about the way this author is drawing and writing all the women in this gives me a bad feeling so imma skip this one.
Look I’m not going to sit and pretend I’m reading this SOLEY for plot, I’m reading it for plot and the smut. Why is it that the first chapters, I believe it was chapter 3 have uncensored smut (her poonani is censored though and we never see his member either tbh) now all of a sudden it’s clouds and text covering everything? That’s not what the fans wanna see, it’s the exact opposite of what the fans want to see.
Future readers: As of chapter 34 which is the most recent scene of smut there is no real smut. It’s as I stated before clouds, cut off screens and text bubbles over the actual smut. So heads up for anyone thinking of picking this up in October 6th of 2026.
So truee i just feel like showing the whole process makes the story so much realer and enjoyable (not in a goonable way cuz i don’t goon to any smut parts) but i just feel like this is such a steal