the sex scenes were beautifully executed. rather than feeling aroused by it, i was more in awe of how the flow made me feel the longing and pain of both of them remembering the past and facing their present selves. This author, ISTG
every thing about this is so succulent. the art, the storyline THE BUILD UP oh god im about to burst!
Dan: *ahhh... the good memories*
The good memory in question: A SINGLE FRAME JENGA GAME
Jaekyung really thought Dan was considering resignation from the look on his face while they were fucking GIRL THATS HOW HE LOOKS EVERYTIME YOU PUT YOUR BIGUSS PEEPEE INSIDE HIM
HOW COME THE SIDE STORY LOOKS BETTER THAN THE MAIN STORY WTH
so anyways can we get the potato and actor scenes now...
dan has to be the most dense character ever written. he was drugged yet he just shrugged it off. he was bribed by the opposing team and still not inform the coach about it. worse, he thought telling jaekyung about it would be the best idea.
this one is just all over the place and its pissing me off. both teams are not allowed to interact with each other hours before the match. this could count for disqualification. this is one heck of a messy writing
dan could've told the coach about it not directly tell it to jaekyung????? doc dan pls be serious...
if not for mingwa's god like artstyle this dumbassery of a story writing will not have any traction at all.
sometimes we dont really need a well thoughtout plot nor dramatic scenes. goofy and sexy is enough
grandma has worn the same red coat all throughout kim dan's academic journey my hearttt IM CRYING
that is some attitude not even a redemption arc can save. as for kim dan, i am so glad he has come to his senses now. you really need a good lashing to realize things. now all i need is for him to stay THE FCK away from that man.
finally, finished it! aaaah the story is good! tho the only criticism i have is how the reward feels a bit lacking with all the build up anf angst before it. i wished there was more meat to their reconciliation. the scenes after the car crash, the one their drying the hair off shouldve been shown more profoundly since thats the culmination of their tug-of-war dynamic. Nevertheless, it was a very entertaining. Congratulations to authornim!
now i just need birds of shangri la to update tooo