Bro the dialogues stop making sense sometimes, and the characters feel too plain. The author wants to create some depth to the MC with this district 13 stuff but tbh I haven't connected to the character at all. And the ML feels distant to ME! boy you gotta do that to the mc not to the reader
Bro the dialogues stop making sense sometimes, and the characters feel too plain. The author wants to create some depth to the MC with this district 13 stuff but tbh I haven't connected to the character at all. And the ML feels distant to ME! boy you gotta do that to the mc not to the reader