You know after reading this; I took a shower, did my hair, had some water, and came right back to comment because I can't let go of how stupid and immature they both are. The ML is such a weird psycho who keeps suffocating the MC with his obsession for YEARS and the MC just takes it like a pathetic bird. He lacks any self awareness, I don't know if he's canonically autistic or something, but how don't you realize in your 30+ years of life that you don't say all that off-putting stuff to someone you "love". And before anyone says "maybe he doesn't know how to properly love since he's never had an example"; he's rich asf I think he can afford a therapist. He must have watched romance shows or something no? Because we are repeatedly shown how "gentle and thoughtful" he can sometimes be. He's just too lazy to truly work on himself or is a malicious person point blank. Now I know I just dragged the ML but the MC pisses me off more. He's also unhealthily obsessed with the ML and bends over backwards for him figuratively and literally (mostly figuratively as he got no play for 7 years lmao). He assumes the ML has 0 feelings for him from the very start of their "relationship". Which alright it's somewhat valid as the ML states he hates betas, but 1 he never questions why the man he loves so much hates betas (if you love someone you always try to figure out everything about them) and 2 HE NEVER JUST SAYS FCK TS IM OUT IN 7 YEARS. I can't stand him having no backbone (which is why Im laying down right now). Author's love giving their ukes "feisty" personalities to cover up how pathetic and stupid their decisions are. I don't want to sound like an ML defender but I understand his strong aversion to betas, he quite literally has traume, and I just know the MC knows nothing about it (bc he never questions where the hate comes from and assumes the grandpa dotes on the ML). SURE the ML doesn't open up to the MC but any partner (especially one for 7 years) would do their best to make a comfortable environment and try to understand the person they love. Another biggg part of the story that threw me off is the MC lying to the ML, and making the ML believe he slept with a random omega. The ML was drugged and is now under the impression that he slept with a random he can't even remember. Does he not realize this can be traumatic asf for the ML? The ML could genuinely argue in a court of law that he was r4ped as he could not consent under the influence. WE IN SOCIETY VIEW THIS AS R4PE (idgaf about the SA tags) the MC is supposed to be intelligent, he's a health professional who struggles with PTSD and doesn't realize how mentally collapsing it could be for the ML to think he slept with someone who was set up by an enemy. The MC was so selfish and downright despicable for that. While on the topic of him being a Healthcare professional how tf does he not clockhe's now an omega? Listen I get that it's a rare ass situation. But a Healthcare professional doesn't think about getting checked up immediately after the first few signs? Do non-omega men just randomly start leaking down there? He doesn't consider it not even after sleeping with the ML and burning all over while he leaks and the ML calls him an omega. How did he pass the national medical exam? Then there's the ML admitting so many obvious things while they're boinking like "I've always dreamt of this" blah blah and he doesn't even think maybe he kinda likes me in a weird way? Maybe I should ask? This leads to my final qualm HOLY LACK OF COMMUNICATION. This could be sorted out in 2 chapters, 5 if we want to get into deep lore and have some spicy scenes. JUST TALK TO EACH OTHER WEIRDOS. At this point I prefer them apart they're so infuriating when together. 7 YEARS OF BS. Anyways sorry to anyone who read this mess of a rant, though I doubt anyone will, I typically don't mind slop but damn these mfs testing me.
You know after reading this; I took a shower, did my hair, had some water, and came right back to comment because I can't let go of how stupid and immature they both are. The ML is such a weird psycho who keeps suffocating the MC with his obsession for YEARS and the MC just takes it like a pathetic bird. He lacks any self awareness, I don't know if he's canonically autistic or something, but how don't you realize in your 30+ years of life that you don't say all that off-putting stuff to someone you "love". And before anyone says "maybe he doesn't know how to properly love since he's never had an example"; he's rich asf I think he can afford a therapist. He must have watched romance shows or something no? Because we are repeatedly shown how "gentle and thoughtful" he can sometimes be. He's just too lazy to truly work on himself or is a malicious person point blank. Now I know I just dragged the ML but the MC pisses me off more. He's also unhealthily obsessed with the ML and bends over backwards for him figuratively and literally (mostly figuratively as he got no play for 7 years lmao). He assumes the ML has 0 feelings for him from the very start of their "relationship". Which alright it's somewhat valid as the ML states he hates betas, but 1 he never questions why the man he loves so much hates betas (if you love someone you always try to figure out everything about them) and 2 HE NEVER JUST SAYS FCK TS IM OUT IN 7 YEARS. I can't stand him having no backbone (which is why Im laying down right now). Author's love giving their ukes "feisty" personalities to cover up how pathetic and stupid their decisions are. I don't want to sound like an ML defender but I understand his strong aversion to betas, he quite literally has traume, and I just know the MC knows nothing about it (bc he never questions where the hate comes from and assumes the grandpa dotes on the ML). SURE the ML doesn't open up to the MC but any partner (especially one for 7 years) would do their best to make a comfortable environment and try to understand the person they love. Another biggg part of the story that threw me off is the MC lying to the ML, and making the ML believe he slept with a random omega. The ML was drugged and is now under the impression that he slept with a random he can't even remember. Does he not realize this can be traumatic asf for the ML? The ML could genuinely argue in a court of law that he was r4ped as he could not consent under the influence. WE IN SOCIETY VIEW THIS AS R4PE (idgaf about the SA tags) the MC is supposed to be intelligent, he's a health professional who struggles with PTSD and doesn't realize how mentally collapsing it could be for the ML to think he slept with someone who was set up by an enemy. The MC was so selfish and downright despicable for that. While on the topic of him being a Healthcare professional how tf does he not clockhe's now an omega? Listen I get that it's a rare ass situation. But a Healthcare professional doesn't think about getting checked up immediately after the first few signs? Do non-omega men just randomly start leaking down there? He doesn't consider it not even after sleeping with the ML and burning all over while he leaks and the ML calls him an omega. How did he pass the national medical exam? Then there's the ML admitting so many obvious things while they're boinking like "I've always dreamt of this" blah blah and he doesn't even think maybe he kinda likes me in a weird way? Maybe I should ask? This leads to my final qualm HOLY LACK OF COMMUNICATION. This could be sorted out in 2 chapters, 5 if we want to get into deep lore and have some spicy scenes. JUST TALK TO EACH OTHER WEIRDOS. At this point I prefer them apart they're so infuriating when together. 7 YEARS OF BS. Anyways sorry to anyone who read this mess of a rant, though I doubt anyone will, I typically don't mind slop but damn these mfs testing me.