First and foremost, rest in peace for the author, thank you for giving this to us. Despite how it started, how it ended left us begginh for more as there was so much to unravel.
Well about the stuff peeps here keep complaining about… ye forcing himself oh lil bro really aint good no matter how u twist it hahaha they could’ve went the “they fell in love despite being (adopted/step) siblings” route before stuff happen but ehh in a way its unique, even though not everyone wanted that part of the story to happen.
Moving on, definitely the plot has a really good potential of running at least 60-80 chaps and more like the people here discussed, the concept about proto hunters and stuff is intriguing. For me tho, I’m really intrigued the most about the MC’s unlocked skills, these special chapters actually brought out the OP in him damn. It would be amazing to see how he would develop these skills and use them to protecc lil bro while testing the servant-master boundary. So amazing really.
Obviously despite the plot, the smut was great (▰˘◡˘▰) also ngl the ml not as innocent as people expect to be, he made them toys for supposed use to the dragon and since that did not work he wanted to test them of the wolf, and also had planned his way to use them on the dragon slayer as well lol. I do agree with one comment that hoped we could’ve seen more of the elf tho fufu
On another note!!! The way Ray’s (dragon slayer) expressions is drawn so fucking hot. Like damn that face!!! MC akowledged it too
ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Wait I might have missed it, what was the baby’s name oh myyyy











Oh my gosh I didn’t know why I put this off for too long. This is amazing, there’s the unusual first meeting, the discovering feelings, the acceptance, the supporting, the misunderstandings, the talk, the reconcilation… my gosh its precious. The way that they respected each other’s boundaries and kind of waited for each other to open up is precious too… gosh what a blessing, thank you (▰˘◡˘▰)