Ryu Okamatsu's Favorite

Now, I do appreciate the new uploader and translator's efforts, a lot. However, there were certain mistakes that need to be corrected. It impacts on the understanding of the story. So here goes the clarifications using the raws and Spanish translations (a multilingual reader):


CHAPTER 72

- Seolhyun doesn't tell Lee to " pull it out" he rather says: "don't take it out", but he thinks in his mind that he couldn't take it, because he felt it was painful.

- Seolhyun further says "I don't want you to take it out", this excites Lee, that is why he got even more excited enlarging his xxx inside our uke.

- Later on, Lee does not say "I'm trying hard", he rather says, "I've been holding back for so long".

- So Seolhyun's answer was not "Shut up! Can't you be patient?" but rather "So noisy! Who asked you to hold back?"

- At the end of the chapter, Yibin said: "I feel sorry for Hwa (Hwa Lee, their son) because they had to forcibly erase his memories".
And he further said "You were off pureblood"

- And HwaGok answered "pureblood or not" it doesn't matter, because you end up becoming a sacrifice."



CHAPTER 73

Here the guy in panel 4, doesn't say "I really don't have money", he says "we don't have time".
The rest is close to their translations.



CHAPTER 74

- Lee doesn't say "Am I not good enough?" he says "Why? He doesn't like me?"

- Lee asks his father, Yibin if he felt like this before (emotions), not if he had been there before (place). Feeling depressed after being dumped, and his father says the truth.
The rest is close to their translations.



CHAPTER 75

- Lee doesn't say at the beginning "He's not answering, there is no reply", he says "I don't understand him, there's no reply".

- When Seolhyun runs to meet Lee, he doesn't say "I'm here cause I need to talk to someone. It's a big and cute female lycan".

He actually says "I'm here cause there is someone I want to talk to, is a cute Lycan that I know of".

- Then Lee asks if Seolhyun was drinking on the panel where is still in Korean.

- When they got to the motel room, I think Seolhyun was talking about that was getting stronger was Lee's smell.

- At the end of the chapter, Lee actually says "You turn out to be cuter when you're drunk".
The rest is good.


CHAPTER 76

- Lee doesn't say "I want to put it in. I want to be inside you". He actually says "I want to put it in, but I need to prepare you".

- Seolhyun doesn't say "Mark me as your female", he only says "Mark me".
Remember, he doesn't know that he is one, and he never outright said to Lee that was a female, he thinks Lee confused him with his adopted brother.

- In the panel where is not translated, Seolhyun says "don't look at me now!"

- In the flashback, it's not written "I am a prince in a fairy tale", it says "YOU ARE the prince in a fairy tale".
Because after that he said that he wished to be the princess for Lee.
The rest is close.


The other chapters, I will check again another day. Sorry for the long-ass comment.


PS: English is not my mother language, so I apologize if I wrote anything wrong.
If you need any explanation about what happened or need any hint of what may happen, links for updated raw chapters, just ask me below.

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