Cookie_Guy's Topics (24)

way too quick?

The whole chapter seemed rushed. Too much happening in too little frames.

for me its not

I understand your opinion but really? Uhm, It's a story? If the author wrote certain situations, it's for the plot to progress and you have no say to it. You can't expect every story to be just rainbow and shits now do you? And also, "creativity died" bish, this is one of the most creative story I've read here. Imagine creating a whole new setting and not just your typical highschool gangster x shy nerd. Like, did you even try to understand the story at all? It's like you just skimmed through it. Stop being a Karen and just stop reading if you don't like it. (●￣(ｴ)￣●)

Ah yea look at me being a karen and pointing out obvious things in the story which literally don't have any reason to be in it. If your plot needs rape to move forward then your plot needs work. Unless you're spreading awareness towards such things. And if not, put a fucking warning. "whole new setting" ah yes, half animal hybrid people set in a postmodern world. The main couple meet through an arranged marriage that just HAD to be done RIGHT AWAY. The uke is a bunny and the seme is a wolf, so original. No one has ever thought of it before.(▰˘◡˘▰)

On a more serious tone. The comment section exists and I can state my reviews of the work here as I wish. Also this still doesn't excuse the lack of a bestiality tag. But yea, you do you ig. If cliche yaoi is what you want, then go right ahead. ╮(￣▽￣)╭

What are you so angry for, your anger is literally spreading everywhere that you can't manage to see that rape is quite common in yaoi that I don't see you commenting on every single one of them. And what's the issue with the hybrid plot? Its cute and it's funny. You'll see a lot of yaoi with this setting but a different characters and plot, no matter how indifferent you think they all are. I've read alot of stories like this and I've read alot, and by far this is the most cutest stories I've read and you're only raging for nothing, if you want I could recommend you some yaois that will give you a real reason to rage. And what's the bestiality tag, It's common sense to expect some bestiality with stories like this. I'm crying laughing,, also, I could recommend you a couple of amazing never done before, once in a life time yaoi with some unique type of shit plot if you want.

Honestly I didn’t rlly like how small the uke was but surprisingly his character design grew on me because the story is NOT FOCUSED ON SEX. Its very inexplicit and it’s mostly about the relationship between the two and how they saved each other. Also they are the same age, and it almost makes sense to be so small since he’s a rabbit lol. Bestiality arguable should be tagged for the more light hearted but it was a brief scene and they both desired to forget it and pretend it wasn’t their first time. Although ur concern about consent is valid pls note that he accepted and willingly drank the Aphrodisiac after. They’re customs are different from our world’s I think they knew that marriage=sex. I think the thing that most stood out to me was how they taught each other happiness, not the sex part. IMO, being so angry will take away from you actually learning what the author is trying to to message.

1) I'm not angry on the comment replying to Phyche and no my supposed anger didn't cloud my thinking.

2) i never said no other yaoi had rape in it cuz tons of them do(it's as if it's a must in some istg). Stop twisting my words.

3) If i went around and wrote reviews about every shitty yaoi out there i'd need more than a few lifetimes.

I'm not saying this is the worse i've read in fact this one of quite mild compared to a lot of others, but that doesn't mean it's the best. Just because something(rape in this case) is common doesn't mean it's good. Rape in yaoi shouldn't be a 'plot' that's really lazy writing specifically because it's so common(you stated this yourself). Just saying "it's cute"(which it is in most scenes if you read them separately) doesn't excuse the fact that it's still cliche. And idc if the yaoi is shitty im gonna read it and leave a review because well, i can so thanks for the warning (=・ω・=)

I get what you mean and i'm thankful you're not trying to bash me for literally stating facts (i really do, thx and kithet) but yea, i never said it was focused on sex. And a warning on bestiality would've been nice. Also the whole customs thing? The author could've explained it in the beginning. Just because most of it was cute doesn't change the fact that one part of it wasn't. And what message??? I just?? There's a message in there?? Learn to love your spouse even if you literally just met them and hope that they love you back too? i dont want to know, that was a rhetorical question and i'm not replying to this thread anymore i have better things to do with my life ╮(￣▽￣)╭

Considering how abundant yaoi manga with shitty plot and actual rape out there and you choose to shitting on this one feels like you just want to troll.
As a veteran reader I could clearly see the difference when manga have an actual plot and when it basically just trying to romanticize rape. This manga have a really deep meaning and rarely focus on the smut scene, and you are claiming creativity dies lol. Art have no originality whatsoever in this point of time. The actually talented author are those who actually could make something cliche fun and entertaining to read, and this manga is fun and entertaining to read. I wonder why people likes to downgrade the actual great piece like this one, when oftentimes I found the mediocre one get all the praising in this world lol

idk if people actual read what i'm typing or if they read the first sentence and decide to make a response. Where did i say this was the shittiest yaoi i read? point it out please so i can walk myself out. If i review every yaoi out there you can refer to my previous comments to see what i'd do. Also, 'cliche' and 'fun'? Using your same argument I can say that there're tons of other mangas with cliche and fun storylines that get bashed and yet you're defending only this one? smh liley. And yes, they don't romanticize rape, but they portray it as something trivial, when in reality it isn't. I feel like i need to finalize some stuff here for people who can't or won't read.

1) This yaoi itself is crap because it contains two(as far as I know) triggering topics(rape and bestiality, refer to my original comment if you haven't) and didn't warn about it.

2) Read whatever the fuck you want idc I never said you shouldn't read this.

3) Yeah there're tons of other worse yaois out there but that doesn't make this one any better, that's like saying ( TW: im using this as an example and it in no way reflects upon what I think of the issue) "rape is better than murder because at least you're alive"

4) The art is great, if I had this author's talent I would be publishing my own work.

5) The plot contains rape and bestiality which is brushed aside as if it's a trivial matter. It's not, and yes, if you remove these two things the story gets much better but ya know to some people they feel the need to include unnecessary stuff into things to get their point across.

6) Please and I mean PLEASE go read everything i wrote and if you can't then go ask someone to interpret it, i'd prefer that over a half assed reply.

summary of the plot:
bunny boi gets forced into a marriage with a wolf boi and prepared to carry children within barely 2 days of being aware of any of the before stated. But dw they get together in the end so *it's all good* (no it's not)

also if someone can explain why the rape and bestiality were VITAL to the plot and could NOT be replaced by any other scene or topic then my dm's are open, it's less messy that way.

as much as I love replying to this thread i have a live too so imma go reread sasaki to miyano (≧∀≦)

excuse my spelling #－.－)

If you could actually read what i type too it would make world easier for both me and you. Where did I say you claim this manga is the shittiest? Did you understand english? I say you choose to shit in this one and I never say you claim this one is the shittiest.
You always say you wont reply more but here you are responding because you intent to troll lol
Tbh I didn't just defend this piece if you realize, I usually reply some shitty response in some great manga.
Okay it would be great if there are beastiality and rape warning, but your thread litterally titled creavity dies when this manga actually one of the most creative out there to build from a cliche one.
I understand that you try to change your point by replying with a lengthy reply but do you realized that you are responding with completely different argument?

And if you ask why there is a need of beastiality lol this manga contain half human half animal as a character to begin with, you just need to look at the cover lol if you are triggered by beastiality you shouldn't read this one to begin with. I notice your response always have negative tendency outside this thread so I know if you reply again, no matter how you try to portray yourself as the 'bigger' one here you just troll lol

Okay so, this is what I remember. So, Cain is injured and needs a doctor. So, he asks Sid to find him a doctor. But Sid decides to betray Cain (I think it was for selfish reasons.) and as he's looking for the doctor to "kill" he meets the MC's cop partner/friend. Then he starts using him as a door.

Anyways, Cain starts to get suspicious of Sid and confronts him. Sid denies that he has betrayed Cain. So Cain believes him. Anyways, doctor over here meets up with pink haired boi- because Pink haired boi is goign to create a tool that can make doors? Or increase the use of doors? But they need a strong soul.

Thus leading them to MC and Cain. But as They're tryna talk to Cain, Sid appears and now lies that Doctor is dead. (Cain doesn't know that the white haired glasses guy is the doctor) so now somebody has to admit the truth-

I hope that makes sense- just reply to me if you have another question.

Thank you so much. I was a bit lost :')

do you know why the green eyed doctor cant say hes the doctor that supposedly "died"?

It's fine :"D I was a bit lost too >.>

It's because he's in fear rn- cause Sid is threatening him. And I think he keeps his identity hidden cause he's wanted by Satan/his disciples? I think that was why- but I'm not 100% sure

So the thing here is.. Glasses guy is a doctor of demons or something.. He can cure Cain but the 'white braided hair' guy called sid who is an apprentice of Cain. When cain got hurt by satan, it was actually planned by sid to put Cain in front line with Satan.. Even though sid is an apprentice but he seeks power and to achieve that sid have to kill a higher rank demon and then devour him to get that power (according to the theory given by Cain before- that big demons devour small demons to get energy) .so in front of sid, the higher energy demon is his master Cain. Now the the glasses doctor guy you know, might cure Cain but sid has been trying to kill the doctor so that cure can't be provided to Cain and Cain succumb to his illness of Satan injury. All those times sid is killing the doctor's clone and the doctor understood that sid is trying to kill him for sure.. NOW LET ME EXPLAIN THE SCENE IN THIS CHAPTER.. Sid, doctor, and cain are all in the same room.. SID VIEW: he had already killed so many clones of doctor so now when he saw the real doctor in front of Cain he's acting like its the first time he's seeing his face but... sid still doesn't know that it's the real doctor, not any clone so now he's waiting for the doctor to make a move like barging in the conversation and say that he's the doctor or something so sid is waiting to either kill the doctor beforehand or just go with the flow of conversation and get out of there since the BDSM demon has the equipment needed to save Cain and he didn't want Cain to know that he himself being an apprentice of a big Demon is betraying his own master. So he's waiting for the doctor to open his mouth and kill him before any secret of his(sid) comes out. (maybe not sure about the equipment of BDSM guy) DOCTOR'S VIEW: he is trying to barge in and understand the situation that he has to reveal he is the doctor and is puzzled that how can sid not understand his face after killing so many clones of his. He finally understand that sid doesn't know that he is the real doctor. So he's thinking if he should come out clean in front of Cain or not. After a little bit of thought he came to a conclusion that sid is hiding any doctor or equipment from Cain that can cure him(cain). So now the doctor cant shout and come out clean or else sid will kill him if he gets a slightest bit of idea that it's the real deal doctor. CAIN VIEW : bitch may still trust SID than the newly arrived doctor.

Yayy ty for the better explanation :"D I was somewhat confused as well. Tyyy ^^

okay thanks for this bc I was confused too

ohhh thats makes sense, thanks