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I had to come back to reread and nitpick because the waaayy.. that had like pissed me off, like it just felt so horrible to see a character fall into this anxious state.
"You were always so focused on just watching things" so you let your child watch two grown ass adults not behave themselves, and expect for him to behave normally and outwardly like other children?
"I was pretty lonely, you know" well thats not his fuckin fault that both of you were incapable of getting your shit together?
"Back when you were little before you got sick, you had alot of happy days too" and he couldve grown happier if yall got your shit together.
LIKE DPMO I KNOW THIS IS JUST A STORY BUT AAAAAA Bro I'll calm down now
Yk as far as fucked up goes, this was pretty fucked up. She literally saw them having sex, thought she could change him, married him regardless, and still was homophobic? Girl you kissed a man whose mouth was all up on your brother's dick. Wtf? And that lousy cheater is disgusting, mc still fucked up anyways tho cause he was sleepin with his sister's husband. Really just messy