If I'm reading it right, the trashy dad said he got blackout drunk and woke up in her bed, and now he wants to re-check the DNA test with Leo. Is it possible that he didn't actually sleep with the hostess and Leo isn't actually his son?
Not trying to defend him, I still think he's trashy, but just curious if that might be the case.
You'd never be "in trouble" for cracking a rib during CPR. Also, defibrillator over the shirt? They would have cut that off way before that point.
Medical accuracy aside (because, let's face it, the setting doesn't really matter), the pacing is a bit slow.
It's like a slightly worse version of "Office Blind Date/A Business Proposal". Not bad, per say, but comfortably mid. I'll probably stop reading it here and check back in when there's 50+ chapters.











OMG stop leading on your brother lol!
If you cant fix it, then use it for your benefit