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I like it, but the thing with the professor was so bland; like it didnt felt like he was an obstacle to the relationship or just a well intentioned guy who was lonely. It just felt uninspired because you take him and the drama out, and it didnt change much. It was just too short to tell it well.
I love how bold Akira is, but he is so empty as a character in a relationship. Like the MC was putting him in a pedestal even when Akira didnt really demostrate a genuine care for him (that wasn't cherring him on). Is like the author didn't know what to do with him.