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It was going GREAT until suddenly it got wrapped up in three chapters and everything was left open or sloppily finished. Where's Franz? Why was the father suddenly acting like he was in love with Paula after hating her terribly? Although I can understand why he'd go into the painting (as if her spirit was calling him into the painting to suffer) why was it made to look like he loved her all along? Bro watched her die bfr. The sister dying quickly was also piss poor, Franz and Olivia doing community work for terrorism?? Man I had high hopes for this ending well cba
Vincent bro please just twat Alicia I'm BORED