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I love how u didn't use ai genuinely slay, if no one responses here try asking subreddits thats tailored to ur thesis hopefully u get better answers there, goodluck!!

Don’t you have an structure for your thesis?

I can’t remember doing thesis but in my Feasibility Study

I had like

Approval Sheet of the Committee
Executive Summary
Table of contents
List of tables
List of figures
Acknowledgement
Dedication
Chapter 1: Problem and its background
Chapter 2: Review of Literature and related studies
Chapter 3: Research Design
Chapter 4: presentation, analysis and data interpretation.

There’s many shit under those chapters that I didn’t include since Feasibility is broader than Thesis but yeah there should structure for your thesis,

I think it's better to have someone check the actual paper in person. as not every remark can be elaborated nor understood through mere chats/messages. preferably someone who's well knowledgeable of your topic and has not yet read your paper, they can provide you with how to better organize information in a way that both the well-versed and the curious can comprehend the contents without confusion.

Thank you guys for all the people who respond here, I didn't think someone will notice this but thank youu (◍•ᴗ•◍)