Couple of things -
#1 - Terrible writing. Had to reread a couple sentences just to understand what idiotic point you were trying to get across.
#2 - You start with, "At the end of the story anyone can do what they want to do...", but end with "I don't think they should allow you...". MMM Smells like hypsocrisy!
#3 - "you decided that you don't w......