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glad for the happy ending but I feel like the story couldve been developed ...

glad for the happy ending but I feel like the story couldve been developed way more….
1. for instance noah (the 2nd brother) didnt get any development despite his backstory on always yielding to the CP and being in his shadow. i wish there were more scenes or development of his rs with ashtarte. it felt like he had a total defeatist attitude towards her despite him caring for her

2. the silver sisters death was way too abrupt?? her relationship w her brothers werent fleshed out at all.. though good for her that her brothers loved her enough to not care about her not being a human (if only care they had some of that spirit with ashtarte -.-)

3. what was the motivation of the “father” of silver princess?? he was the one to get the priest to construct an artificial human being which led to this mess but why?? honestly in the story it only felt like he wanted to fight against ml

4. why did the priest agree to making an artificial being? yes he may be greedy for more fame and power but wasnt the risk way too high? esp given that at the end he still seemed to be concerned about whether god would forgive him

5. it just didnt sit right with me how the family gave up on ashtarte. their rationale was so self serving (that she wld be happier away from them). personally i wouldve preferred if they grovelled and repented more… like even if the respected her wishes and stayed away from her, it didnt even seem like they felt that bad about it. only the 2nd brother seemed to actually feel any sense of remorse ngl

6. all in all the ending felt a little rushed with the world building and setup not fully developed, with little depth

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