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This was a good one but the ending felt rushed. The wedding should have been much more grand and the story needed a side story
yeah very rushed towards the end :/ the conclusion came so quickly the main villain was literally in like max two chapters LOL
I like the storyline; it’s interesting. But why add romance? It feels unnecessary. She is an elf, so she might be much older than she looks, yet she is undeniably an adult and a teacher, while he is an 11-year-old kid, even if he’s technically an adult in a child’s body. Having a grown woman develop romantic feelings for a child is just gross and weird.
Please don’t force a romance where it doesn’t belong. It would be much better if she stayed a loyal ally or a partner who stands by the ML’s side.