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So I didn’t read much and mainly skimmed to see if it’d be something I’d be interested in and got only to chap 3 and here’s my thoughts as someone who is NOT gonna read all the way through, first of all waiting 30 years just to be accepted by your crush is a little excessive, second of all it’s fine for a poly just a bit weird imo (no offense) and THIRD AND MOST IMPORTANT WHY TF WOULD YOU READ SONETHING WITH INCEST, HUGE AGE GAP AND GROOMING WTF Naou (idk his name) deserves to be left in a ditch somewhere (and the fact this his bf is around the same age as Mei… ew) and the kidnapping is just… so random and psychopathic