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yall either too soft or whatever but the side stories (while very very unnecessary) was not all that traumatizing or horrible or fucked up like you make it sound.
i get that it's hardcore but i was honestly thinking it is worse than just whatever the fuck was even portrayed. it just so unnecessary to the whole thing. it basically just adding more sex to the mix because why the fuck not. idk. author just rlly into the smut.
for my personal opinion by reading this whole story thanks to the comments here, this shit was just straight up pure sex and that shit is fkn boring. i don't even really like or dislike a character in this because for some reason they feel really shallow, despite knowing about their past and stuff. i just really could not care less lol
so for that.. well, this was a waste of my damn time.
this story feels very.. blonky. to jump to 9 yrs to the future on the second damn chapter is honestly wild. i do know it happens in other stories and stuff but the way everything is going on feels so weird. the pace is very fast with things. it almost doesn't really make sense as to why something goes a certain way but well, i could only get to chapter 23 for now..
but to have me force myself to read this, that's robbing the fun out of it tbh. maybe i'll finish this some other time